Fantasy novels and technical writing

I recently read the “Gryphon” trilogy by Mercedes Lackey and Larry Dixon (only some of the many to-read books I culled from Penguin Girl’s various book-related blog entries). It’s typical mass-market fantasy fiction… cool fantastical animals, magic, warring mages, destruction, etc.

I found myself rather bored with the first book, and it was only through pure willpower that I finished it and picked up the next. The second book, though, intrigued me and kept me turning its pages. The third book was also interesting to me. A series that I had been willing to write off as “bad writing” ended up sucking me in.

Looking over this surprising reading experience, I think that part of my problem with the first book is something common to a lot of fantasy/science-fiction novels — the reader is thrown into a totally different world too soon with no point of reference. Weird names and italicized terms, references to geography and political powers — all of these are thrown at the reader with no context and hardly any explanation. Perhaps more discerning readers have an easier time with this, but I found my poor head spinning (or maybe that was from having a low-grade fever?) as it tried to process all of this new information. Only after digesting the entire first book — becoming familiar with the geography, the terms, the “rules” — was I able to enjoy the second and third books in the series.

A quick run to my library indicates that the fantasy books I’ve enjoyed from the beginning generally start out with easy-to-relate-to contexts, so I think my theory is holding strong so far.

This is starting to sound more like common sense than some deep insight, however. Of course I would be more comfortable starting out “where I’m at” than diving into something completely different and new.

Nevertheless, here are my Lessons of the Day:

  1. As a reader: Read the first AND second book of a series if you want to give it a “fair chance.”
  2. As a fantasy writer: Gently lead your reader into your “world.”

I think that rule #2 applies to many other kinds of writing, including technical writing. This is something I need to keep in mind as I wrote articles/tutorials.

Okay, this is ALL sounding like common sense at this point, but I’ve already gotten this far in my blog post so I may as well put it up.🙂 Sometimes I just need to point the obvious out to myself.

2 thoughts on “Fantasy novels and technical writing

  1. I’ll point you to another book, which I wish I had when I started the *entire* series.. some of which are better than others. The Valdemar Companion. It includes maps which aren’t necessarily included in other books. While I could draw my own if I really wanted to.. I don’t. (Note: they are not necessarily of the best quality).

    I like your lessons for the day. The second is definitely for other writing and definitely for tutorials of which the ‘student’ may not be fully familiar with the topic. Something I have had to keep in mind as I attempt to train a new employee and we both attempt to teach our users.

    Thank you! (Hope you are feeling better)

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